Sunday, May 3, 2009

feed part1

well first the story starts off in space with a group of teens the main charecter and narrators name is Titus his group of friends with wierd names that sounds like they were found in a video game or a comic book is Link,Marty,Calista,Quendy, and loga. They were on there way to the moon on there spaceship and they seemed bored as to the way that they were reacting they were haveing a debate if there faces are organs or not and i noticed that there communication is kind of off. They used words like unit, low-grave, shitall, null ect the smatest one in the group was Titus link and marty are completly stupid and the hip Calist wih the under minded quendy and luas in her own category. On there way to the moon Titus desribed how space had trash all over it and how the moon had creators full of trash and i wondered if thats how we will get in the future? The reason why they had gone to the moon was because they wanted to dance and drink and to just have fun. when they arrived at the club/hang out spot they were all on there feeds the feed is a chip that was inserted into the brain at birth and is used for advertisments while at the club Titus had noticed a different indivisuall from the rest off the crowd and he thought she was buetiful well her spine at least.

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